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Firstly, I chose after you great job in my chapter three I was very happy about it. Other order I was in hurry, but i was satisfied. So that is I chose you.


I will make this order like 10 days, because I want to choose also for another order for like 4 or 5 days as it is argent. But I will provide all articles you need.





Section one: My paragraph

In addition, the contemporary curriculum is informed by research in first and additional language learning theory such as functional grammar and communicative language teaching approaches that focuses on the social role of language1).This is my supervisor feedback


What I want: Please use the following authors as my supervisor suggested them, Bourdieu and others to write about Communicative pedagogy…

In last order I asked about same point, but the writer did not do what I suggested, and wrote about the following authors by other. So please please mention The 4 suggested as much as you can.





Section 2: My paragraph


In most cases, due to gender inequality in Western societies in discourse of motherhood ‘the family’, divorce most often results the mother having the sole responsibility to care for the children. However, as sole mothers are normally not economically empowered, this impacts on their children’s acess to quality education (Killen & Rutland, 2011).My supervisor feedback



What I want: According to my supervisor suggestion please. I will provide the articles for Robisons and Robinsons Jones Diaz



The ban on divorce across the major religions in the world was meant to ensure the protection of the child. In this regard, the child is well cared for by the two parents (Kendrick & Kakuru, 2012). This is very much link to above (Robinsons and Robinsons and Jones Diaz


I will provide the following:

Article (1) Robinsons and Jones Diaz, article (2) Robinsons


But for Robinsons (2013) please use this resource





Section 3: My paragraph

However, within recent years, there has been increased anxiety and moral panic among Western societies regarding the welfare of the children. In this case, child protection has come under threat from paedophiles. The panic has led to the calls for enhanced surveillance among children to protect them from ‘stranger danger’, child abuse and paedophilia. My supervisor feedback


Again (Robinson, 2013) Please follow the suggestion